Changeset 47d763c in orbit

Timestamp:

10/07/13 11:29:02 (7 years ago)

Author:

Steve Castellotti <sc@…>

Branches:

master, Servo, pyramid

Children:

ddcd1b4

Parents:

0a60a15

Message:

Tutorial:

• minor typos and wording adjusted

Location:

android/assets/tutorial

Files:

• images/puzzlebox_logo.png (added)
• step04-2.html (modified) (1 diff)
• step05-1.html (modified) (1 diff)
• step06-2.html (modified) (1 diff)
• step07-2.html (modified) (1 diff)
• step08-3.html (modified) (1 diff)
• step10.html (modified) (1 diff)

android/assets/tutorial/step04-2.html

@@ -16 +16 @@
          <li>An EEG measures electrical activity in the brain on the microvolt scale (millionths of a volt)</li>
          <li>Signal processing algorithms convert these readings into measurements of mental clarity and concentration</li>
-         <li>This software uses those detections to transmit control commands to the Orbit helicopter</li>
+         <li>This software treats those detections as a trigger to transmit control commands to the Orbit helicopter</li>
       </ul>
 

android/assets/tutorial/step05-1.html

@@ -14 +14 @@
       <ul>
          <li>Please enable Bluetooth and pair your NeuroSky MindWave Mobile EEG headset with your device</li>
-         <li>The EEG has three positions for its power switch: Off, On, and Pairing Mode. After sliding the switch past On and holding several seconds, the blue light should change to a double-blink</li>
+         <li>The EEG has three positions for its power switch: Off, On, and Pairing Mode. After sliding the switch past On and holding for several seconds, the blue light should change to a double-blink</li>
          <li>Once the blue pairing light is double-blinking, you can enter the "Bluetooth" menu in the "Settings" app to search for and connect to the EEG</li>
          <li>Use the "Search for devices" feature if the "MindWave" device is not displayed by default</li>
          <li>Click the "MindWave" devices to complete pairing</li>
+         <li>Different versions of Android may present these menus with a slightly different appearance but functionality should remain the same</li>
       </ul>
 

android/assets/tutorial/step06-2.html

@@ -26 +26 @@
                   <ul>
                      <li>Check the forehead sensor has contact with skin and no hair is underneath</li>
-                     <li>The ear clip should be firm yet feel comfortable</li>
+                     <li>The ear clip should be fitted firmly yet remain comfortable</li>
                   </ul>
                </td>

android/assets/tutorial/step07-2.html

@@ -14 +14 @@
       <ul>
          <li>Check the forehead sensor is actually touching the skin and there is no hair underneath</li>
-         <li>Ensure the ear clip is on firm (but not painful)</li>
+         <li>Ensure the ear clip is fitted firmly (but is not uncomfortable)</li>
       </ul>
       <ul>

android/assets/tutorial/step08-3.html

@@ -17 +17 @@
          <li>Stare intently at a fixed point</li>
          <li>Calculating math in your head (example: counting down from 100 by 7's)</li>
+         <li>Imagine everything you would need to pack for a long road trip or vacation</li>
          <li>Silently recite the alphabet backwards</li>
          <li>Translate phrases into a foreign language</li>
-         <li>Imagine everything you would need to pack for a long road trip or vacation</li>
          <li>Try not to move, blink, or talk!</li>
       </ul>

android/assets/tutorial/step10.html

@@ -13 +13 @@
       
       <ul>
-         <li>In the event of a crash or if the propellers make contact with some object the Orbit will enter "safety model" and shut down
+         <li>In the event of a crash or if the propellers make contact with some object the Orbit will enter "safety mode" and shut down
       <!--
       </ul>